REDIGER UNE CONCLUSION

 

- identifier le type de document d'après le contenu des extraits;

- déduire, d'après une conclusion, le sujet traité;

- justifier ses choix par référence au document.

 

READ

Here are the last paragraphs of three different pieces of writing.

Text A
I can't approve of this conception of journalism. The role of the Press is to inform as impartially as possible. Or else there is no difference between advertising a product and dealing with the news. This conception is all the more dangerous as the press has huge power over people's opinions.

 

Text B

At first I could not understand. I read the message again. I shook with surprise and shock. Then I could not remain silent any longer. I turned to the bald mexican.

"You fool", I shouted, "you've killed the wrong man !"

 

Text C

"So we're in no hurry to start a family, although I am sure we will in the future."

And the couple who live in Grenoble, France, are sure they will prove the doubters wrong, and show that their marriage can survive all the ups and downs. Fabien said : "In my eyes, small is beautiful".

 

OBSERVE

1. In your opinion, where are these extracts taken from ? Write A, B or C in the appropriate boxes.

 

 

A short story

 

a novel

 

a scientific treatise

 

 

a science-fiction book

 

an article

 

a student's essay

 

SELECT

2. From among the following suggestions about the topics of these texts, choose the ones that best correspond to the concluding paragraphs. Tick one for each text.

 

 

 

Text A

 

 

Text B

 

 

Text C

 

 

 

The Press should be censored

 

 

Baldness in Mexico

 

 

A size difference is not an obstacle to marriage

 

 

 

TV is more popular than the Press

 

 

A spy's adventure

 

 

Young married people do not want to have children

 

 

 

The power of the Press.

 

 

A successful adventure

 

 

The ups and downs of life

 

 

 

Journalists always tell the truth

 

 

A pleasant message

 

 

In Grenoble, citizens don't like people to be different

 

3. Underline in the three texts the words or the sentences that helped you choose the topics.

 

4. In which texts : (Tick the columns)

Text A

Text B

Text C

 

Which text :

Text A

Text B

Text C

·       can you find opinions expressed ?

 

 

 

 

·       is more of a debate ?

 

 

 

·       is there a résumé of a previous development ?

 

 

 

 

·       is more of a social issue ?

 

 

 

·       is there an element of surprise ?

 

 

 

 

·       has an emotional tone ?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

·       is rather tragic ?

 

 

 

 

DRAW YOUR CONCLUSIONS

 

Rédiger un paragraphe de conclusion

·       d'un essai, d'un débat, c'est faire la ----------------------------- des idées développées et donner son -----------------------------.

·       d'une nouvelle, c'est souvent ----------------------------- le lecteur par une fin -----------------------------.

·       d'un article, c'est très souvent rassembler les faits et -----------------------------, élargir le ----------------------------- et ouvrir des perspectives.

 

CHECK YOUR PROGRESS

5. Write a conclusion for an essay. It dealt with Newspapers vs. Television (main ideas developed : the power of written words, the impact of images).

Sum up the main ideas and express your personal opinion (40 words)

 

6. Write a conclusion for a short story. Here is the scenario. A man was the victim of a car-crash and he was taken to hospital; but he had lost his memory. One day he received a mysterious message.

Write the end of the story (40 words)

 

7. Write a conclusion for an article whose topic is Video-games and whose headline is "Computer-game boy in coma". In this article you can read : "Stuart who is now tested for epilepsy is the latest in a long series of computer-games victims."

Write the last paragraph of this article (40 words)